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"I almost gave myself away because I know nothing about carrots." This line is a lead, Alicia. Use it again as an opening line for a short story. Beautiful!

"...my mark of adulthood, [is] that I know what a dutch oven is..." Another brilliant lead line! It instantly made me ponder the mark of my own adulthood. At my advanced age, I should know the answer to the question, but I don't... yet.

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I’m so glad the carrot line stood out to you! I will have to use it as a lead. All these years later and I still don’t know anything about carats, either ☺️

The markers of adulthood — it is quite the writing prompt! I’ve only truly felt “adult” more recently at 37.

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